Elite College Application Essay Bootcamp - Personal Statement Intensive G11-G12

✍️Elite College Application Essay Bootcamp - Personal Statement INTENSIVE
 Write to Win at Top Colleges. Stand Out. Get Accepted! 
 
ElevatEd Elite College Application Expert：
👨‍🏫 Mr. Hunter Tharpe  
🎯 Students admitted to Caltech, Yale, Brown, Stanford, UPenn 
💰 $3M+ scholarships secured in one year 
✍️ 375,000+ words edited across 400+ essays
🏛️ Coached first Ivy admits (Princeton & Cornell) in school history  
🎓 Princeton & Duke admit | UNC full-ride scholar 
📈 #1 statewide in student growth (2,200+ teachers) 
🚀 Led school turnaround from bottom 10% to #1 in NC 
🏆 North Carolina Principal Fellow (2025) 
Hunter doesn’t just teach writing—he coaches students to write essays that win. 
 
🚨 The Most Important 650 Words in Student Application 
The Common App Personal Statement is the only place where student speaks directly to admissions officers. 
Grades, test scores, activities—those show what a student has done. 
 
The essay shows who they are. And that’s often what makes the difference. 
 
Yet most students: Start too late Write something generic Miss what admissions officers are actually looking for
👉 This is where applications are won—or lost. 
 
🚀 A High-Impact, 6-Session Intensive
- focused, strategy-driven admissions bootcamp. 
 
Across 6 live sessions, student will go from: 
👉 “I don’t know what to write” to 
👉 A compelling, structured, admissions-ready first draft 
 
🎯 By the End of the Bootcamp, Student Will Have 
A complete first draft built on a strong, validated idea 
Proven frameworks used by top college admits 
A clear narrative strategy aligned with admissions psychology 
Direct expert feedback—not generic edits 
A meaningful head start over peers 
 
🧠 What Students Actually Learn to stand out in admissions. 
Students master: 
Proven Essay Structures
3-Scene Narrative 
Problem → Solution
Transformational Arc
V-SPICE Framework
What top colleges actually look for: 
Vulnerability 
Initiative 
Curiosity
Impact 
Narrative Positioning 
→ How to be authentic without sounding cliché 
Strategic Editing 
→ Turning ordinary ideas into compelling insight 
 
📚 6-Session Curriculum 
Session 1 : Common App Brainstorming — 21 Details, 5 Moments, 3-Scene structure
Session 2 : Paragraph Pitching — Test your ideas with proven frameworks
Session 3 : Revising Pitches — 20-60-20 ratio, V-SPICE integration
Session 4 : Word Dumping — Break through writer's block, draft 1,000 words
Session 5 : Editing — ElevatEd rubric, elevating clichés to insights
Session 6 : Starting & Ending Strong — Hooks, takeaways, final polish
 
🗓️ Schedule
 • Grades 11–12  
 Jun 15-25 MON/WED/THU
   🕔 5:00–6:00 PM ET
   🕔 2:00–3:00 PM PT
   👨‍🏫 Instructor: Mr. Hunter Tharpe
 
    💻 Live Zoom Classes with Recording  
   👥 Small Group Lessons  
   📝 Individual expert feedback from Mr. Tharpe—375K+ words edited across 400+ successful college application essays
 
WHAT STUDENTS SAY
"I learned so much and feel a lot more confident and prepared. Every piece of feedback was helpful!"

"The instructor walks you through from brainstorming to writing so it's never too intimidating. Patient, friendly, great feedback. Wonderful experience!"

"I was a robot when it comes to essays. I was able to add emotion, real experiences, and better structure. Thanks again!"
 
🚀 Starts earlier, Thinks deeper and Win big !
Whether you’re applying to the Ivy League or your best-fit school, this bootcamp empowers you to write a personal statement that reveals your voice, your vision, and your story—so admissions officers don’t just read your application, they remember it.